tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6380302759428891353.post5795044199994496315..comments2023-11-03T04:19:50.039-07:00Comments on Tommaso Gervasutti: Charlbury, summer 2011.Tommaso Gervasuttihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17137499390434949734noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6380302759428891353.post-27515590969065305492011-08-29T07:59:01.364-07:002011-08-29T07:59:01.364-07:00Wonderful work, Davide. The next time I hear the ...Wonderful work, Davide. The next time I hear the wood pigeons I'll listen to hear what they're saying to me - you brought their personality to life.<br /><br />Pedantic point - "myriad" should not have "of" after it (lines 4/5).Gordon Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11405099521661854141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6380302759428891353.post-42572657308178551622011-08-29T01:34:03.484-07:002011-08-29T01:34:03.484-07:00Quite a few telling images in this. The first two ...Quite a few telling images in this. The first two lines were a good start, and then the next four made of them a complex and intriguing image. The rest of the poem lived up to its beginning.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.com